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- Naruto - Remnants of Solitude by paxnirvana - [ part 01a - part 01b - part 02 ] - [Note: I feel I should mention that the author says there may be spoilers up through the most recent chapters (250+), but I haven't noticed much yet. Still. Be warned.] Okay. I'm going to make an attempt to reign in the gibber here, seriously, because this story is one of those that is taking my breath away, that is KakaIru that's in the style of the series itself, that does justice to both the characters/pairing and the storyline. I know that sounds rather fawning of me to say (though, that is just the way I am ^_~), but there are few stories that really get me to believe them these days, especially after 250 chapters worth of exploring the complexities of the characters. (Well. Mostly Kakashi, but the fic hardly makes Iruka a lightweight, either. *__*) The beautiful thing about the story is that it does an amazing job with Kakashi's character, the depth of everything that's weighted on his soul, the weariness of the character, the harshness of the character, yet without making him gloomy or hopeless. Instead, he's a brilliant jounin who has far more talent than perhaps any one person should have (even if there are still people who are far stronger than he is), but... not much else. In his personal life, that is. And it's not a case of cute puppy love and following Iruka around or even particularily easy, Kakashi is just... Kakashi dealing with being laid out for a week because of what Itachi had done to him (the way it affected his dreams afterwards, the affect what Itachi had done to him was beautifully done, it measured up to what happened in the series, the pain and trauma of it, without making it too over the top angsty, it was a quieter sort of impact, making it all the harder to watch) and that Iruka's stability helps him rest better. A lot of what makes it work are the little touches--Kakashi's frustration that Konoha is stretched too thin right now and he, being one of their most valuable assets, can't do anything or the way he finds amusement and annoyance in one of the other chuunin assigned to him that is way too twitchy or the absolutely brilliant scene with Tsunade that made me squee and sparkle over both characters--as well as the sparkling dialogue between Kakashi and Iruka. ....oy, I'm explaining this rather badly, mostly just fawning and gushing over various parts rather than making any sort of coherent rec, but... well, I just finished reading it, what more would you expect from me? So, trying to sum it up... beautiful writing, excellent characterization, a fantastic believability factor for this pairing, absolutely fantastic and hilarious dialogue, and an insightful Kakashi perspective that makes me wibble like whoa. (Kakashi/Iruka.)
She also does battle scenes, she does plot, she's even weaving in elements of the regular storyline, as of chapter eight, the Sound Nin have shown up and I am fascinated with how this universe is slightly different, how thinks have changed and the ending of that chapter was fantastic and OH MY GOD I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW NOW NOW. ....ahem. But, no, really. What started out as a really neat way to see an incredibly strong fighter!Iruka in a believable way seems to have grown even more of a plot, is starting to spiral off in its own direction, and the story is only getting stronger and more interesting for that. I mean, I don't think Kakashi was even the last couple of chapters much at all, and I'm still all *___* and can't put the fic down. ....bah, another terrible rec. Go read anyway. (Kakashi/Iruka.)
Because Iruka may have been only a Chuunin. But he was also a teacher. There were at least ten different lines in this story that I wanted to quote, because they made me roll around on the floor, clutching my sides in laughter. The author has fantastic comedic timing, which really pulls off a story like this--where Kakashi is stalking Iruka because he has a crush, but he's hopelessly outclassed. It's one of those stories that's just fun to read, that it has that certain sparkle that's not done really well nearly enough in the fandom, because seeing Iruka trying to figure out what the hell is up with Kakashi, reading the scene where he goes to Gai to try to get a little more info, reading about how he tries to divert Kakashi's weird energies... it's all so hysterically funny. Especially after reading so much serious KakaIru fic, I really could have used something lighter and sillier like this--I love my humor!KakaIru so much, I really do. ♥ (Kakashi/Iruka.)
....and I realize I'm citing a lot of crits for a story that I don't think really deserves a backhanded compliment sort of rec, because I did still enjoy myself immensely while reading it, I do still think that it belongs on my list. Because there are moments in the story where... Neji'll be expounding on fate and a free-as-the-wind bird will fly over in the most perfectly comedic timing by the author and I will have to stop and just laugh hysterically. Or Gai will come bounding into a scene and he will be just absolutely perfect and I'll be reduced to kicking my feet in a laughing fit all over again or Sasuke and Neji will have their little "....hn."-off or Sasuke's reactions to everything or when they have to come up with a plan to get Kakashi and Iruka "back together" or when Iruka is absolutely ADORABLE when he doesn't know WTF is going on or a million other things that make this a genuinely good story. Also, the writing flows really well, making it the kind of story that you can start and a half an hour will go by before you've even noticed it. Much, much fun and I totally loved the crack. ♥ (Kakashi/Iruka, with hints of other canon-friendly pairs.)
A lot of what makes it work for me is that the author is truly taking her time and truly setting up enough details of the background world to make me feel like it could, so far, have taken place somewhere in the manga's world, that this hidden village could have maybe fit together with Kishimoto-sensei's world and that the characters would react like this. (Tsunade is especially fun to see and one of the things that really hit home with me is how people often comment about how Konoha is so weak and scattered these days, given all that they can muster to send out there.) It helps that the author makes good use of background details without taking over the story, it helps that the characters feel like themselves, and it helps that there are actually fight scenes and a plot that isn't just a flimsy excuse or backdrop for sappy romance. As I mentioned above, it's been 200k+ and romance hasn't even begun to enter the picture, it's all about travelling to the hidden village, it's all about Iruka not knowing what the hell he's supposed to do, and the latest chapter even included a bit of the tough training he's going through. I like this story because it's really solid, because it's gives me plot, gives Iruka something to do, yet doesn't ignore the rest of the cast. Several characters are very nicely in character and I'm absolutely looking forward to more of this story. Both for the plot and because I want to see the author's take on KakaIru. ....this was a terrible rec for a fic that's actually going to be one of my favorites for the fandom, I think. Oy. (Eventual Kakashi/Iruka, but it reads like gen for now.)
Because it's a story that's tackling something that's so damned difficult--a Kakashi perspective, really delving into what makes him tick on a day to day basis. There was a comment in one of the author's notes that struck me, that the author said it was difficult to understand the character, not just mimic him, but I think she's doing a really bang-up job of it here. Kakashi's mind games with his students, the genuinely clever ways the author has him being kind of a bastard teacher to them (instead of falling flat or dull, they actually work, they feel like they do justice to the series itself). Kakashi's world-weary, tired personality that winds together with the way he's such a brat sometimes is beautifully done, it doesn't feel schizophrenic here, it feels like he does in the series. And then there's the way the other characters look at him, the way Jiraiya sees him or comments on him, knowing him better than one might think or being rather fond of him, what with Kakashi being his favorite student's favorite student. There's a definite sense of connection between all the characters, nothing is really left out, not Jiraiya, not Tsunade, not Yondaime, not Sarutobi-sensei, which really builds this immensely satisfying read for me. There are also action scenes, good action scenes!, and Team 7 is hardly forgotten and, oh my god, the brilliance of the glimpses you get of Kakashi and Shikamaru interacting! And, man, Kakashi's weaving in and out of all those different moods is really amazingly done, he's so human here, so full of little touches that make him a fully-fledged character, not just an insane amount of skill and a shitload of chakra or just a perverted bastard teacher. When he's coming back from a ANBU-equivalent mission and hoping Sakura doesn't recognize him because he doesn't want his team to think of him as little more than a dangerous killer, the undercurrent that he actually cares about them and how they think of him? Brilliantly done. As you can see, I really wanted to talk about this story, because it's one of the better ones I've read recently, even aside from the KakaIru. Hell, even after four chapters, there's really not a whole lot of interaction between them--there's been some and it's obviously building somewhere, but it's not taking over the story, I would actually put it as second to the Kakashi characterization, actually. Just... there are moments in this story that floor me, whether because I had to muffle my laughter into my pillow or because I was wibbling over my favorite characters and what terrible lives they're forced to live. I'm only halfway through chapter four and already I've been itching to talk about it because it's one of those stories that's fabulously paced, it's long, but no scene really feels wasted or overly stretched just to fill time, the narration flows smoothly along and it's epic without being dull. It's an awesome story and totally does justice to the characters and, god, this is the kind of fic I've been pining for lately. (Some Kakashi/Iruka, but it's fairly light.)
It's just... that is the kind of stuff I secretly pine for but know would be hell to write/justify, because I understand that they don't really have that much reason to interact, even aside from Yondaime or Naruto, but then this author went and did it, the way there's a reason there and the way Jiraiya looks at that little Hatake brat (I love, LOVE that both Jiraiya and Tsunade think of him as a total brat and, oh, man, the Jiraiya/Tsunade-friendly scenes? TOTAL LOVE. I don't think the author is necessarily intending them, but I just loved the interaction so much. I love the way she writes these characters.) is just absolutely fabulous, especially when Kakashi is sort of losing it because he's been under too much stress lately. Well, really, all of the supporting characters get some serious love from me with this story, because it's still Kakashi-centric but each scene sort of builds somewhere or uncovers a new facet or is just interesting, like Sasuke's little breakdown that you don't actually see 'on-screen', but Kakashi's attempt to reach out without crack was lovely or the way Gai is actually a lot more three-dimensional in this story than he is a lot of times or the way Kakashi has Sakura help him with a problem he has, everything is just... I adore it because it's not just people sitting around and angsting, they're doing stuff. There are dozens of little lines in this story that, as I read, strike me as being the perfect sort of thing to quote (chapter nine really sort of put that into focus for me with the Kakashi is like a broken vase, hurriedly glued back together, he thinks, and he’s found his way close enough to the Copy Nin to notice the cracks. line), all these little insights into the characters. I will grant that I don't know if the more dramatic parts of the story work as well as the less dramatic parts... err, what I mean by that is I'm not sure when Kakashi "breaks" that it's as stunningly in character as when he's sort of holding himself together on a day to day basis. It's not entirely the author's fault (as much as a word like "fault" can be used here), because we don't really see that and I fully think that she's doing a fantastic job here, that with a lot of other writers, I would have been rolling my eyes instead of enjoying the story on the level it was meant to. And I'm a little wary of the KakaIru parts of the story, actually, but... it sort of feels like I'm picking at tiny little details and forgetting that the majority of this story is really kind of awesome. This is one of the best Naruto fics I've read for any corner of the fandom, this fic is doing an awesome job of Kakashi's character (which isn't easy) and I will forever love this fic for the way it brings everyone together in an unofficial family sort of way. I am absolutely addicted to this story because I'm dying to know where the subplot with Jiraiya and Kakashi is headed, especially because the author is doing a fantastic job with Jiraiya's character, too. I'm fascinated because the author really does include a lot of little details in the writing, all these details of being a shinobi and the way things work, yet she doesn't overshadow the writing with it, it's still about the characters themselves, which really lends it even more of a feeling like the manga itself. The pacing continues to be just right, stuff happens and moves along, but it's not too glossed over or too dragged out, it's the kind of writing that sucks me in and won't let me back out, because I always want to read that next scene. Oh! And Rin's involvement in the story was... ouch and it was perfect because it wasn't overdone, but it still hurt like hell and just... man. And I also mentioned Jiraiya = ♥ here, right? Okay, just checking. (Kakashi-centric, some KakaIru that's not the point of the story, really.)
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